Reviewing each others essays in class today.

     For class today we had a big peer review session. Everyone looked at each others papers and made suggestions and did some constructive criticism. I looked over Mark's, Elena's, Colleen's , and Amir's papers. I made some spelling changes, grammar changes, and some other changes that deal with the idea of the paper. I had Amir look over my paper. He saw some things I needed to change. For one I need to add a title. I also need to change my heading from right to left. This paper is due tomorrow and we must have it printed out in class or we lose 20 points automatically. The paper is on the difference between the Roman Empire and the Roman Republic.